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My Son"s acrostic poem about SEASIDE Summer time is fun Everybody are making sandcastles A lovely picnic is coming Sand is really really hot I saw a ship in the distance Diving is very exiting Exploring for shells in the rock pool.. Damian is 10years old,and I hope that you like his own poem.

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asked by Kina
  1. It's very good. :-)

    However, line 2 should be: Everybody is making sandcastles.

  2. Thank you very much for yours help.

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  3. You're very welcome.

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