Baluch struggle during the 1970’s, most importantly the insurgency, left a legacy of resentment and enduring hostility towards the Pakistani government. Still, today’s conflict key parties are the Pakistani government and the Baluch people of Baluchistan. Pakistan is governed as an “ethnic nation” with dictatorial political structure (Jaffrelot 32). It remains firmly under the control of the military government headed by General Pervez Musharraf a military bureaucrat that rules under Islamic principles (Grare 4). In 2001 Musharraf declared himself president, in 2002, he amended the Pakistan constitution without the participation of parliament. This Legal Framework Order (LFO) amendment further gave Musharraf complete control over parliament which he used to change the electoral rules to disadvantage opposition parties (Freedom House). The LFO also gave him the right to unilaterally dismiss the national and provincial parliaments, as well as providing for a National Security Council under the control of military figures that would supervise the work of a civilian cabinet. Thus, Mushrraf reforms further emphasized the already centralized character of the constitution, making small provinces to feel alienated (Jaffrelot 51).
In December 2005, after a rocket attack targeted president Musharraf, he refused to engage Baluchi groups politically and initiated counterinsurgency paramilitary operations, which has led to a humanitarian crisis (Freedom House). During the insurgency the army killed the 79-year-old Baluchi separatist leader Nawab Akbar Khan Bugti and a number of his followers. Bugti’s death led to increased political instability and rioting, increasing the tensions among Baluchi’s (Freedom House).
Add the word "The" before "Baluch" at the very beginning of the first sentence.
In "today's conflict key parties" there seems to be something missing. It's incomplete.
Comma after "Musharraf" in the fourth sentence
Use "who" after "bureaucrat" (not "that")
Comma after "2001"
Run-on between "president" and "in 2002"
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Add "the" before "disadvantage" and add "of" after "disadvantage"
Change "providing" to "provide" - for parallel structure
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In the last sentence of the first paragraph, use "Musharraf's"
Comma after "insurgency"
is this ok?
In 2001, Musharraf, declared himself president. In 2002, he amended the Pakistan constitution without the participation of parliament.
In 2001, Musharraf, declared himself president. In 2002, he amended the Pakistan constitution without the participation of parliament.
Delete the comma after Musharraf and add the article, "the," before "parliament."
I hope this helps. Thanks for asking.
The passage you provided highlights the Baluch struggle during the 1970s and its lasting impact on the relationship between the Pakistani government and the Baluch people. The conflict primarily involves the Pakistani government, which is governed as an "ethnic nation" with a dictatorial political structure under General Pervez Musharraf, and the Baluch people of Baluchistan.
To understand more about the Baluch struggle, it is important to explore various sources such as academic research, news articles, and reports from organizations like Freedom House. These sources provide valuable insights into the historical background and ongoing conflict between the Pakistani government and the Baluch people.
You can start by referring to books and studies on the Baluch struggle, such as the work of Christophe Jaffrelot, a well-known scholar on South Asia. His book, "The Pakistan Paradox: Instability and Resilience" explores the political dynamics and ethnic tensions within Pakistan, including the Baluch struggle.
Additionally, you can find information on the political structure of Pakistan and the role of General Pervez Musharraf. Sources like Gilles Grare's book, "Pakistan: Perilous Path to Democracy" offer detailed accounts of Musharraf's rule and his impact on the country's political landscape.
Furthermore, reports from organizations like Freedom House can provide important insights into specific events or actions taken by the Pakistani government, such as the implementation of the Legal Framework Order (LFO) amendment by Musharraf. These reports often outline the implications of such actions on democratic processes and the rights of opposition parties.
Finally, news articles from reputable sources can provide up-to-date information on recent developments in the Baluch conflict, such as the rocket attack on President Musharraf and the subsequent counterinsurgency paramilitary operations. These articles can shed light on the impact of such events on the Baluch population and the overall political stability in the region.
By consulting various sources, including academic research, reports from organizations, and news articles, you can gain a more comprehensive understanding of the Baluch struggle and the ongoing conflict between the Pakistani government and the Baluch people.