1. If I met my favorite movie star, I would try shake hands with him.
2. If I met my favorite movie star, I would take his autograph.
3. If I met my favorite movie star, I would just smile at him.
4. If I met my favorite movie star, I would show my pocket notebook for autograph.
5. If I met my favorite movie star, I would shout at him for joy.
6. If I met my favorite movie star, I would take pictures a lot with my smart phone.
7. If I met my favorite movie star, I would call my friends and let them know that.
(Would you check the sentences? Correct errors, plese.)
1. It is correct to say either "I would try shaking hands with him" or "I would try to shake hands with him."
4. "For an autograph."
6. Maybe, "I would take a lot of pictures with my smart phone."
P.S- I am a student going into 8th grade, not a tutor.
Anonymous is correct.
Also...
In 2, say 'get' instead of 'take'
In 5, delete 'at him'
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Sure! I can help you check the sentences and correct any errors. Here is the revised version:
1. If I met my favorite movie star, I would try to shake hands with him.
2. If I met my favorite movie star, I would ask for his autograph.
3. If I met my favorite movie star, I would simply smile at him.
4. If I met my favorite movie star, I would show him my pocket notebook and ask for his autograph.
5. If I met my favorite movie star, I might shout with joy.
6. If I met my favorite movie star, I would take a lot of pictures with my smartphone.
7. If I met my favorite movie star, I would call my friends and let them know about it.
I have made slight modifications to improve the clarity and coherence of the sentences. Remember, it's important to be respectful to famous individuals when you meet them and to consider their personal boundaries.