Could you please check this short paragraph for mistakes? Thank you, I appreciate it.

Quand Heffner a pensé de créer sa société il vivait dans un motel et il il n'a eu aucun espoir. Sa société ne faisaient pas bien. Cinq ans après être parti de la maison, il n'a eu rien. Mais la chance des hugh changée et maintenant il est l'une des personnes les plus réussies d'affaires sur la planète.

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