Hey, just look up the grammar, tenses and wheter I use the right words, ok? It is for an oral excercise so the spelling isen't important.
Thanks
and now the text:
Mandy: Good Morning and welcome to the morning show with me: Mandy Melrose! Today I wanna talk with you about Youthism. As you all know many celebrities can’t handle the thing of getting older and therefor they do a lot a operations to oppose the process. What did you think about cosmetic operations? Would you do same, too? Or are you afraid of unpleasant consequences? Such as a mistake during or after the operation? I’m interested in your opinion! Call me. The number is 0 5 2 7 2 7 7 7. And now Carly Rea Japson will help me that my Phone will ring!
Song Call me maybe
Mandy: Hello again, For all of you who just turn the radio on, our today’s topic is Youthism. And I just
ask you to give me a call, as Carly did in her song. And hear is our first caller. Hello! What’s
your name?
Maria: Good morning Mandy. My name is Maria.
Mandy: Hi Maria, what’s your opinion to the Topic? Are you for or against cosmetic operations?
Maria: What a question! I am totally against it In my opinion everyone has to be like god create him.
You have to accept what you look like and you have to accept that you are getting older. That is the way god supposed it to be. God loves you the way you are. Cosmetic operations aren’t a solution! It’s awful to change anything in gods creation.
Mandy: ok, ok. Thank you Maria. Can you tell me how old you are?
Maria: I’m 17 Mandy. Why did you ask?
Mandy: I’m just interested, because you are so young and nevertheless you have a clear opinion to that topic. So what would you do if your best friend, or even your mother would decide to do cosmetic operation?
Maria: No of my friends or family member would do anything to destroy the creation. For sure we all share the same opinion about that. God’s creation is a holy thing for us! And destroy it would be totally against our belief.
Mandy: Thank you Maria for calling me and sharing your opinion with us!
Maria: No problem, you are welcome Mandy. I think all people should respect the Creation.
Mandy: Thank you and after a short advertisement we hear our next caller
Advertisment
Maria: Here we are again. And we are still with our topic Youthism. I just talked with your first caller
Maria. She was totally against cosmetic operations and think that everyone should respect
God’s creation. I’m excited to know who’s now on the phone.
Hello, Who’s there?
Charlotte (C): Hello this is Charlotte. I’m 22 years old and have already made 5 operations.
Mandy: Hello Charlotte! Oh interesting, 22 and already 5 operations! Which parts of your body aren’t
what they were before? And why did you change them?
C: Well, I had an operation on my nose, my , my ears, liposuction, and lip enhancement. And to your second question, I made it because everyone has the right to look the way they
wanted to look.
DO NOT post these things more than once. If someone wants to respond, he or she will find it the first time.
I'll delete your former post. Please don't do this again.
i wont do it again.
Overall, the grammar and tenses in your text are mostly correct. However, there are a few areas where some corrections can be made:
1. Sentence correction: "...the thing of getting older and therefore they do a lot a operations..."
Correction: "...the process of getting older and therefore they undergo a lot of operations..."
2. Sentence correction: "What did you think about cosmetic operations?"
Correction: "What do you think about cosmetic operations?"
3. Sentence correction: "Would you do same, too?"
Correction: "Would you do the same, too?"
4. Sentence correction: "Or are you afraid of unpleasant consequences?"
Correction: "Or do you fear any unpleasant consequences?"
5. Sentence correction: "Such as a mistake during or after the operation?"
Correction: "Such as a mistake during or after the operation?"
6. Sentence correction: "The number is 0 5 2 7 2 7 7 7."
Correction: "The number is 0 5 2 7 2 7 7 7."
7. Sentence correction: "And now Carly Rea Japson will help me that my Phone will ring!"
Correction: "And now Carly Rea Jepsen will help me make my phone ring!"
8. Sentence correction: "Hello again, For all of you who just turn the radio on, our today’s topic is Youthism."
Correction: "Hello again, for all of you who just turned the radio on, our today's topic is ageism."
9. Sentence correction: "And hear is our first caller."
Correction: "And here is our first caller."
10. Sentence correction: "What’s your opinion to the Topic?"
Correction: "What's your opinion on the topic?"
11. Sentence correction: "In my opinion everyone has to be like god create him."
Correction: "In my opinion, everyone has to be as God created them."
12. Sentence correction: "You have to accept what you look like and you have to accept that you are getting older."
Correction: "You have to accept what you look like and the fact that you are getting older."
13. Sentence correction: "That is the way god supposed it to be."
Correction: "That is the way God intended it to be."
14. Sentence correction: "Cosmetic operations aren’t a solution!"
Correction: "Cosmetic operations are not a solution!"
15. Sentence correction: "It’s awful to change anything in gods creation."
Correction: "It's awful to change anything in God's creation."
16. Sentence correction: "For sure we all share the same opinion about that."
Correction: "For sure, we all share the same opinion about that."
17. Sentence correction: "God’s creation is a holy thing for us!"
Correction: "God's creation is sacred to us!"
18. Sentence correction: "And destroy it would be totally against our belief."
Correction: "And destroying it would go completely against our beliefs."
19. Sentence correction: "Thank you and after a short advertisement we hear our next caller"
Correction: "Thank you, and after a short advertisement, we will hear from our next caller."
20. Sentence correction: "I just talked with your first caller Maria."
Correction: "I just spoke with our first caller, Maria."
21. Sentence correction: "She was totally against cosmetic operations and think that everyone should respect God’s creation."
Correction: "She was totally against cosmetic operations and thinks that everyone should respect God's creation."
22. Sentence correction: "I’m excited to know who’s now on the phone."
Correction: "I'm excited to know who is on the phone now."
23. Sentence correction: "Hello, Who’s there?"
Correction: "Hello, who's there?"
24. Sentence correction: "Which parts of your body aren’t what they were before?"
Correction: "Which parts of your body have changed?"
25. Sentence correction: "And why did you change them?"
Correction: "And why did you decide to change them?"
Overall, the text looks fine with these corrections. Good luck with your oral exercise!
Mandy: Thank you for sharing, Charlotte. You mentioned that you had operations on your nose, , ears, liposuction, and lip enhancement. Can you tell us why you decided to change these parts of your body?
Charlotte: I believe that everyone has the right to look the way they want to look. I wanted to enhance my appearance and feel more confident in myself. I felt that making these changes would help me achieve that.
Mandy: That's an interesting perspective. What would you say to those who argue that cosmetic operations go against the idea of accepting and appreciating oneself as they are?
Charlotte: I understand that some people believe in accepting and appreciating oneself as they are, and that's perfectly valid. But for me, personally, I believe that cosmetic operations allow individuals to have control over their own bodies and make choices that make them feel happier and more comfortable in their own skin.
Mandy: Thank you for sharing your perspective, Charlotte. It's important to hear different opinions on this topic. After a short break, we will continue discussing Youthism with our next caller.