In this paragraph, any errors on capitalization, commas or semicolons? Also, should "they are all to report directly to me be part of the next sentence instead of the first sentence? Thanks again!
Howard Clark will be the supervisor for the third shift, Betty Miller will be the supervisor for the Saturday shift, and Clarence Hill will be the supervisor for the Sunday shift; they are all to report directly to me. However, I think I am starting to come down with something since I have been coughing and sneezing all day. If I should have to be out over the next two or three days, would you check with these three for me?
I would put semicolons after "third shift" and "Saturday shift" and a period after "Sunday shift."
The sentence beginning with "they are all... " needs to be a separate sentence.
Everything else looks fine.
In terms of punctuation, there are a few changes that can be made in the given paragraph:
1. The "however" in "However, I think I am starting to come down with something" does not require a comma before it.
Regarding the capitalization, there are no errors in the paragraph as all the proper nouns and words at the beginning of sentences are capitalized appropriately.
Now, let's address the placement of the sentence "They are all to report directly to me." It depends on the intended meaning and emphasis. If you want to emphasize that all three supervisors need to report directly to you, then it should remain in the current position. However, if you want to convey that the reporting part is for all three supervisors collectively, you can consider moving it to the beginning of the next sentence.
Here are the revised versions based on each scenario:
1. With the sentence in its original position:
Howard Clark will be the supervisor for the third shift, Betty Miller will be the supervisor for the Saturday shift, and Clarence Hill will be the supervisor for the Sunday shift; they are all to report directly to me.
2. With the sentence moved to the beginning of the next sentence:
Howard Clark will be the supervisor for the third shift, Betty Miller will be the supervisor for the Saturday shift, and Clarence Hill will be the supervisor for the Sunday shift. They are all to report directly to me.