1. Tom seems to like playing basketball. We can see a basketball and his uniform in the room. Look at the top and the bottom of the uniform. The basketball is on the uniform shorts.
(is this passage grammatical? Would you correct any errors?)
2. My favorite street food is meat pie. It tastes sweet and delicious. I usually buy meat pie on the road near my apartment. I love eating meat pie!
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