I just need someone to check my mistakes. This is a short essay using futur simple.
Pendant ces vacances, je pourrai voyager avec ma famille à Dubai. Nous ferons à Burj Khalifa et à Dubai mall pour verrons les plus étonnantes vues et des boutiques. Je verrai mes amis et mes cousins. Ma famille et moi y resteront pendant deux semaines et j'espère que nous allons avoir du plaisir.
Not nous ferons i meant nous irons
Bravo, c'est une production écrite créée avec soin!
A few little things:
- "à Dubai mall" : do you mean a shopping centre? (centre commercial) unless it is a proper name, in which case you would write
"Dubai Mall".
- "pour verrons"
a verb following pour is (almost) always in infinitif.
You could also say afin de voir meaning "in order to see".
- "...y resteront..."
in futur simple do not confuse the endings -ons (first person plural) and -ont (third person plural).
If in doubt, think of the conjugaison of avoir.
Work well done!
Here's the corrected version of your essay using futur simple:
Pendant ces vacances, je pourrai voyager avec ma famille à Dubaï. Nous irons au Burj Khalifa et au Dubai Mall pour voir les vues les plus étonnantes et faire du shopping. Je verrai mes amis et mes cousins. Ma famille et moi y resterons pendant deux semaines et j'espère que nous aurons du plaisir.
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