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write a newspaper report about ..A lorry has shed load of fruit on the motorway.The traffic is standstill.... i wrote this....................................A lorry has shed its load of fruits while taking action to avoid another car on the M11 motorway in Essex.

The lorry driver was unhurt while the driver of the car suffered minor injuries.

Police say the fruits spillage spread across three lanes, resulting in tailbacks of several miles.

However, the spillage has since been cleared but rumours that a slice of toast the size of a house was used in the clean-up operation have yet to be confirmed............................ Could somebody check this for me ,please.

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asked by kina
  1. Compare very carefully to find the corrections I made. Let me know if you have questions.

    A lorry has shed its load of fruit while taking action to avoid another car on the M11 motorway in Essex.

    The lorry driver was unhurt, but the driver of the car suffered minor injuries.

    Police say the fruit spilled across three lanes, resulting in tailbacks of several miles.

    The spillage has been cleared, but rumours that a slice of toast the size of a house was used in the clean-up operation have yet to be confirmed.

  2. What are you thinking about changing the end of this story,and how?

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    posted by kina
  3. The last sentence in the story is humorous! I wouldn't change it at all. =)

  4. Thank you very much from Damian Donarski.

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    posted by kina
  5. You're very welcome!

  6. I need a more detailed report. This will be submitted to the US NAVY, for achieving the Nobel prize. Therefore, pay me.

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