i have been asked to correct the sentence would you please assist : 1.when will you eat are you not hungry

It's hard to know the intent of the writer.

Some possibilities --

If you are not hungry now, when will you eat?

Aren't you hungry? When will you eat?

thank you Ms Sue for making it possible

You're welcome, RS.

in letter writing i cant understand why comma (,)is not followed after To in addresss could you assist

There is no rule for putting a comma after To.

As this site explains, we use a colon after To in memos.

http://www.whitesmoke.com/punctuation-colon.html

Certainly! I can assist you in correcting the given sentence. Here's the revised version: "When will you eat? Aren't you hungry?"

To correct this sentence, we need to separate the two questions and use proper punctuation. In the original sentence, the two questions were combined without any punctuation or conjunctions. By simply adding a question mark after "eat" and capitalizing "Aren't," we can create two separate questions.