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I need to write at least one paragraph regaurding this

Urinalysis is a very commo diagnostic test. Describe and name the poddible abnormal results related to the test.. indicate the disorders tha these abnormal test results may sugguest.

My answer

Mr Jones went to his doctor because for the past few day he has been having frequent burining uriation. The doctor order a urinalysis. The urine was cloudy and yeallow in color with a strong oodor. Test results revealed that there was some bacteria noted. These abnormal test results suggest that Mr Jones has a UTI

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Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. Be sure to check spelling/typos, etc. Line 1 "commo" needs an "n" = "common" and "poddible" is probably "possible" plus "tha" is "that."

In your answer, "Mr" needs a period = "Mr." "day" is "days" "burin ing" is "burning" "yeallow" is "yellow" "oodor" is "odor" and a period at the end of the sentence.

Also, a urine alysis test will tell if someone has gout (too much pruines) or kidney failure (creatin) for two more examples.

NOTE: My creatin should be "creatine."

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Your paragraph is a good start in describing a possible abnormal result in a urinalysis and its associated disorder. It provides some relevant information about Mr. Jones's symptoms, the appearance of his urine, and the presence of bacteria. However, there are a few additions or revisions you could make to enhance the paragraph:

1. Begin with an introductory sentence that explains what a urinalysis is and its purpose in diagnosing various conditions.

Example: "Urinalysis is a commonly performed diagnostic test used to evaluate the composition and characteristics of urine. It helps identify abnormalities that may indicate underlying health conditions or diseases."

2. Provide a clear link between the abnormal test result and the specific disorder, UTI, that the doctor suspects.

Example: "The presence of cloudy and yellow urine with a strong odor, coupled with the detection of bacteria in the urinalysis, strongly suggests that Mr. Jones might be experiencing a urinary tract infection (UTI)."

3. Include a brief explanation of how a UTI occurs and its typical symptoms.

Example: "UTIs usually occur when bacteria, such as E. coli, enter the urinary tract through the urethra. Symptoms often include frequent and burning urination, discomfort in the lower abdomen, and a sense of urgency to empty the bladder."

By incorporating these additions and revisions, you can provide a more comprehensive and informative paragraph about the abnormal test results and their associated disorder.