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Same-sex marriage should be legalized because it is uncivilized to deny homosexuals their civil rights. The Constitution guarantees everyone equal rights and opportunities, however, s are denied both in terms of marriage.

is this better? I have support in other paragraphs

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  1. Yes, this is much better. :-)

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  2. Be sure to put a semicolon (;) after "opportunities" not a comma. Otherwise, it's a run-on.

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