I need to re-write a poem into a free verse, but I'm not very good at poems. This is what I have to re-write:

We saw the months of wicked weather,
As day to painful night did turn,
Waiting, huddled close together
For the frozen sun's return

This is what I have, but I don't know if it's right:
Wicked winds and storms have passed,
The days are cold but the nights are blood freezing,
We huddle on to life and warmth in the cold
Waiting for the warmth and glory the sun brings

Writeacher I reprased it.

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To rewrite a poem into a free verse, you have the creative freedom to break away from traditional rhyme schemes and meter. Here's how you can continue re-writing the given poem into a free verse:

We witnessed months of wicked, wild weather,
As day transformed into painful night,
Gathered together, huddled close, tethered,
Awaiting the frozen sun's return, our beacon of light.

In this version, I have taken the original rhyme scheme and structured the lines with natural pauses and breaths instead of following a specific meter. However, it's important to note that free verse allows for experimentation and personal expression, so you can revise and modify the lines to suit your own style and desired effect.