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Job description: use various types of equipment, develop, secure, and packages. Physical evidence for scientific evaluation and comparison, prepares detailed reports on the observation and activities at the scene for law enforcement agency.
Training and education required: enroll in a bachelors degree program in criminal justice, or bachelors degree in forensic science, forensic, anthropology or forensic biology. Training can begin in college, with courses in chemistry, forensic, anatomy, and biology. Requires at least 700 hours of training in the proper processing of a crime scene. At least 80 hours of training in fingerprint retrieval and analysis, at least 80 hours of training in death investigation, 50 hours of training in bloodstain analysis and 40 hours of training in photography, in addition to attend study in arson causes, forensic pathology and firearms.
Personal abilities and interest: engaged in searching, evaluating, collecting, documenting, and otherwise assessing crime scene evidence, Requires a clear speaking voice, the ability to receive, understand and act upon oral instructions thorough the use of a radio. Requires ability to lift heavy objects and equipment weighing up to 100 pounds. Requires ability to walk, stand, stoop, crawl, kneel, climb and push/pull objects. Must be able to visually identify or describe persons, vehicles, locations or describe physical evidence and crime scenes by sketching, report writing and providing courtroom testimony. how they save people lives and how they get to investigate who committed the crime.
Working condition: uses their scientific prowess to uncover the truth they can help identify a criminal and analyze evidence.
Average earning for the job: $24,083- $64,564
Outlook for job opportunities: Csi duties fall under the bureau description of a forensic science technician, while others are covered under the job profile for criminal investigation. Employment of forensic science technicians is expected to grow by 19 percent from 2010 to 2020, about as fast as the average for all occupations.
Why is this the best profession for you: because I like to investigate and I want the world to be a better place so while doing csi I help to uncover the truth and find the criminal.
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In reviewing your text for grammar, usage, mechanics, and spelling, here are a few observations:
1. There are a few instances where punctuation could be improved. For example, in the sentence "Job description: use various types of equipment, develop, secure, and packages," it should be "packages."
2. In the sentence "Physical evidence for scientific evaluation and comparison, prepares detailed reports on the observation and activities at the scene for law enforcement agency," it seems like there might be a missing subject. It could be rephrased as "The forensic scientist prepares detailed reports on the observations and activities at the scene for law enforcement agencies."
3. In the sentence "Training and education required: enroll in a bachelors degree program in criminal justice, or bachelors degree in forensic science, forensic, anthropology or forensic biology," the repetition of the word "forensic" seems unnecessary. It could be rephrased as "Training and education required: enroll in a bachelor's degree program in criminal justice or a bachelor's degree in forensic science, anthropology, or forensic biology."
4. The sentence "At least 80 hours of training in fingerprint retrieval and analysis, at least 80 hours of training in death investigation, 50 hours of training in bloodstain analysis and 40 hours of training in photography, in addition to attend study in arson causes, forensic pathology and firearms" could benefit from clearer sentence structure. Consider breaking it into separate sentences or using bullet points to list the required training hours.
5. The sentence "Requires a clear speaking voice, the ability to receive, understand and act upon oral instructions through the use of a radio" could be improved by removing the repetition of "the ability to" and rephrasing it as "Requires a clear speaking voice and the ability to receive, understand, and act upon oral instructions through the use of a radio."
6. In the sentence "how they save people lives and how they get to investigate who committed the crime," it should be "how they save people's lives" to indicate possession.
Overall, your text demonstrates a good understanding of grammar, usage, mechanics, and spelling. There are just a few areas where minor improvements could be made.