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Jason Turner thought he did the right thing when he had seen a man get into a car and drive off much too fast. A year earlier, another dangerous drive was injuring a friend of his, when he was knocking him off his motorbike. So Mr. Turner, a 36-year-old financial dealer, had followed the man in his own car. When they had stopped at traffic, Lighter Turner had shouted at the other driver. He was telling him to slow down. But the other driver hadn't taken any notice. Mr. Turner Later was telling the police that it was only then that he was trying to hit the other car. "The man drove too fast, and often on the wrong side of the road. Mr. Turner had to pay a large fine for dangerous driving. Was that right," Mr. Turner had explained. 'And I was stopping him.' The police did n right? What do you think?

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Jason Turner thought he did the right thing when he saw a man get into a car and drive off too fast. A year earlier, another dangerous driver had injured a friend of his by knocking him off his motorbike. So Mr. Turner, a 36-year-old financial dealer, followed the man in his own car. When they stopped at a traffic light, Turner shouted at the other driver, telling him to slow down. But the other driver didn't pay any attention. Later, Mr. Turner explained to the police that it was only then that he tried to hit the other car. "The man drove too fast and often on the wrong side of the road. Mr. Turner had to pay a large fine for dangerous driving. Was that right?" Mr. Turner explained. "And I was trying to stop him." The police did nothing, right? What do you think?

Jason Turner thought he had done the right thing when he saw a man get into a car and drive off too fast. A year earlier, another dangerous drive had injured a friend of his when he knocked him off his motorbike. So, Mr. Turner, a 36-year-old financial dealer, followed the man in his own car. When they stopped at a traffic light, Turner shouted at the other driver, telling him to slow down. However, the other driver didn't pay any attention. Later, Mr. Turner told the police that it was only then that he tried to hit the other car. "The man was driving too fast and often on the wrong side of the road. I had to stop him," Mr. Turner explained. He had to pay a large fine for dangerous driving. Do you think that was right? Did the police do the right thing?