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How can you improve this phase...
"For it was the end of our vacation"...i think it sound kind of bad or chessy...

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  1. It sounds out of context. What is the entire sentence it's from -- or maybe two or three sentences?

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  2. I am writing a found poem and that is the last line of my stanza...
    It pass our time away,
    For it was the end of our vacation.

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  3. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Found_poem

    I understand the concept somewhat, but I'm having a hard time understanding what you're writing about. I guess my big hang-up is the word "it" -- since it's not clear what "it" is, I don't understand the lines.

    Or maybe you just need better (more visual) words for "end of our vacation"?

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