Mr. Bob Pursley-
You have critiqued multiple essays of mine- is there recurrent mistake that I make? What can I do to make it go from a 5 to 6? Thank you so much.
When it comes to critiquing essays, Mr. Bob Pursley has likely identified recurrent mistakes in your writing that are hindering your essay from reaching a higher score. To find out what these mistakes are and how to improve, it would be best to review the feedback Mr. Pursley provided on your essays. He likely highlighted specific areas for improvement and provided suggestions or corrections.
To access your past interactions with Mr. Pursley and review his feedback, you can follow these steps:
1. Check your email or any communication platform you used to submit your essays to Mr. Pursley. Look for any messages or attachments he sent in response to your work.
2. Review the comments or annotations directly within your essay document provided by Mr. Pursley. Pay attention to recurring patterns or phrases he used to point out your mistakes.
3. Take notes on the specific areas identified by Mr. Pursley as needing improvement. This could include issues with grammar, organization, the development of ideas, clarity, or other writing elements.
4. Reflect on the feedback given by Mr. Pursley and consider implementing his suggestions in future essays. Focus on one or two areas of improvement at a time, practicing and refining your skills step by step.
Improving your essay score from a 5 to a 6 can often require addressing multiple aspects of your writing. However, by carefully considering the feedback provided by Mr. Pursley and actively working on areas of weakness, you can gradually overcome recurring mistakes and make significant improvements in your essays.
Remember, practice is key in honing your writing abilities. Continuously write and seek feedback to further refine your skills.