Can you help me make my thesis sound clear & good

In the short story, "how much land does a man need," the author Leo Tolstoy would describe that human worth based on shallow measurements such as wealth and possessions make true love and humanity impossible because of greediness, the devil filling our minds with selfishness, and being able to go beyond limits since theres no balance between possessions and love.

Yah ... i feel its too long.. HELP?

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  1. Yikes! It sure is too long.

    This site has excellent advice about thesis statements.

    http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

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