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how can i word this differently:

People advise others to stay clear of the horrible consequences of despair.

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  1. You have two non-specific words -- people and others. What are more specific words you can use in their places?

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    Ms. Sue
  2. Do I have to make them specific if that is my top sentence for a paragraph that relates back to this thesis: The characters of the novel demonstrate how misery drives people to do things they would not normally do.

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  3. Yes, I think you do have to use a specific word for people. Who advises others to avoid despair? Who advises other characters not to lose hope?

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  4. Okay. Thank you for your help.

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  5. You're welcome.

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