Can you please check linkers and punctuation in this paragraph? Thank you very much Writeacher.

Complete the following short text with: and, but, so, because, when, while (I can't find an example of "while")

1) It was half past ten at night. Jane was in her bedroom (when) the doorbell rang. it was dark (so) she switched on the lights and went downstairs. She opened the front (but) there was nobody there. Nervously, she closed the door (and) went into the kitchen. She was scared because she was alone.
2) She closed all the windows (and) doors tightly. A few minutes later, she heard a strange noise in the garden. She looked out of the window (and) screamed (when) she saw what was outside.
3) Some very old women were jumping around. They were wearing big black hats (and) long black dresses. Just then, Jane remembered that it was Halloween.

All are fine.

While she saw

Here is the corrected paragraph with the appropriate linkers and punctuation:

1) It was half past ten at night when Jane was in her bedroom. The doorbell rang, so she switched on the lights and went downstairs. She opened the front door, but there was nobody there. Nervously, she closed the door and went into the kitchen because she was scared since she was alone.

2) She closed all the windows and doors tightly. A few minutes later, she heard a strange noise in the garden. She looked out of the window and screamed when she saw what was outside.

3) Some very old women were jumping around. They were wearing big black hats and long black dresses. Just then, Jane remembered that it was Halloween.

To check the linkers and punctuation in a paragraph, follow these steps:
1) Read the paragraph carefully and identify the sentences that need to be connected using linkers like "and," "but," "so," "because," "when," or "while."
2) Determine the appropriate linker for each sentence based on the context and meaning.
3) Insert the linker at the appropriate place within the sentence or between the sentences.
4) Ensure proper punctuation by using commas, periods, or question/exclamation marks based on the sentence structure and meaning.
5) Once you have made the necessary corrections, read the paragraph again to confirm the correct usage of linkers and punctuation.