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I personally respect every religion, and I love reading holy books. Holy books inspire many people. Holy books taught me many morals and stories on our everyday life, which really helped me, learn what the purpose of us being in this world is. I read the Quran everyday of my life to learn and get inspired from. Reading the Quran is part of my religion, but I read other religious texts for a reason which is knowledge.
The Quran has many stories that inspire me, but one of the stories that I adore is the story of Maryam or Mary. The Quran, Bible, and many other holy books mention Mary in different views and stories. What makes her story really special to me is that Mary was the only women mentioned by name in the Quran. It is also my favorite story because people amazingly are inspired by her in different religions, and languages. She taught me to be patient and always have faith in god.
I love reading stories about miracles and so believe they can happen. Witnessing a miracle is one of my wishes I know will come true. My dad knows how much I love weird, miracles, and true stories. So, when he went to Lebanon he got me this Arabic book called "القصص الغريبه" which means weird stories. This book was a truly amazing gift; it had hundreds of miracles people witnessed. This book specifically talked about people who marvelously met Imam Al-Mahdi (Prophet Mohammad's grandson).
Shīa Muslims believe he is alive, hidden, and will return to bring justice to the world. Imam Al-Mahdi disappeared thousands of years ago and people believe he will come back. One of the stories in this book was about this lady with cancer. She prayed to Imam Al-Mahdi to help her, and she met him in Mecca. He told her to drink Zamzam Water and she will be cured. When she went to the doctor he told her that she was clearly cured from cancer. This woman and thousands of others were saved by this man, and that made me truly believe he is in this world.
Good and evil are always fighting in every generation. The battle that happened on
Oct. 10, 680 didn’t just fight for good, but it also fought for peace, truth and justice.
"The Battle of Karbala" is this sad story I read every year on the 10th of Muharram; it happened between the Benu Umayya clan and the Benu Hashem clan.
Yazid ibn Muāwiya ibn Abi Sufyan, (Benu Umayya clan) was a dictator that had no fairness in his ruling, and Imam Al-Husain (Benu Hashem clan) was Prophet Muhammad's grandson that fought against evil. Imam Al-Husain refused to pledge allegiance to Yazid. Imam Al-Husain's camp was surrounded by Yazid's soldiers and water supplies were cut from Imam Husain's companions and family. What makes this worrier my top roll model is that nothing stopped Imam Al-Husain from fighting against tyranny. Imam Al-Husain suffered and sacrificed so much in that battle that even his infant was arrowed in the chest and killed. Imam Husain was killed in a criminal way that no words can explain. Each time I read the words in this book my eyes water. Terrorist in till this day are killing and bombing people in Iraq because they love this worrier and visit his grave each year. He taught many Iraqi people to fight for justice and never give up. Each time I finish the story I feel happy and sad. I feel happy because the falsehood of Benu Umayya clan appeared to be triumphant over the truth, and that was Imam Al-Husain's goal, but I felt sad on all the suffering and killing that happened.
One of the other reasons why I really like the story of "The Battle of Karbala" is because after all that suffering that happened against tyranny Benu Umayya clan did kill the good people, but they didn’t cut all the good roots.
Al-Mukhtār Al-Thaqafī is the good root I was talking about. He was my hero that killed Imam Al-Husain's killers. He was against Umayyad Caliphs , and he also fought for peace. That made me really believe that evil people can never get away on the things they do.
All these worriers were killed because they said no to humiliation and injustice. What makes these three stories similar to me is that they all talk about famous and holy people. They taught me to be patience for the sake of truth, and to have faith in God.
I personally respect every religion, and I love reading holy books. Holy books inspire many people. Holy books have taught me many morals and stories about our everyday life, which have really helped me learn the purpose of our existence in this world. I read the Quran every day to learn and gain inspiration. Reading the Quran is part of my religion, but I also read other religious texts for the purpose of gaining knowledge.
The Quran contains many stories that inspire me, but one story that I adore is the story of Maryam, also known as Mary. The Quran, Bible, and other holy books mention Mary in different views and stories. What makes her story really special to me is that Mary is the only woman mentioned by name in the Quran. It is also my favorite story because people from different religions and languages are inspired by her. She has taught me to be patient and always have faith in God.
I love reading stories about miracles and I believe that they can happen. Witnessing a miracle is one of my wishes that I know will come true. My dad knows how much I love weird, miraculous, and true stories. So, when he went to Lebanon, he got me this Arabic book called "القصص الغريبه" which means "weird stories". This book was a truly amazing gift; it contained hundreds of miraculous stories witnessed by people. This book specifically talked about people who had extraordinary encounters with Imam Al-Mahdi, who is Prophet Mohammad's grandson.
Shīa Muslims believe that Imam Al-Mahdi is alive, hidden, and will return to bring justice to the world. Imam Al-Mahdi disappeared thousands of years ago and people believe that he will come back. One of the stories in this book was about a lady with cancer. She prayed to Imam Al-Mahdi to help her, and she met him in Mecca. He told her to drink Zamzam Water and she would be cured. When she went to the doctor, he told her that she was clearly cured from cancer. This woman and thousands of others were saved by this man, and that made me truly believe that he exists in this world.
Good and evil are always in conflict in every generation. The battle that took place on Oct. 10, 680 didn't just fight for good, but also for peace, truth, and justice. "The Battle of Karbala" is a sad story that I read every year on the 10th of Muharram. It happened between the Benu Umayya clan and the Benu Hashem clan.
Yazid ibn Muāwiya ibn Abi Sufyan, from the Benu Umayya clan, was a dictator who ruled without fairness, and Imam Al-Husain, from the Benu Hashem clan, was Prophet Muhammad's grandson who fought against evil. Imam Al-Husain refused to pledge allegiance to Yazid. Imam Al-Husain's camp was surrounded by Yazid's soldiers and water supplies were cut off from Imam Husain's companions and family. What makes this warrior my top role model is that nothing stopped Imam Al-Husain from fighting against tyranny. Imam Al-Husain suffered and sacrificed so much in that battle that even his infant was shot in the chest and killed. Imam Husain was killed in a cruel way that cannot be explained in words. Each time I read the words in this book, my eyes water. Even to this day, terrorists are killing and bombing people in Iraq because they admire this warrior and visit his grave each year. He taught many Iraqi people to fight for justice and to never give up. Each time I finish the story, I feel both happy and sad. I feel happy because the falsehood of the Benu Umayya clan appeared triumphant over the truth, and that was Imam Al-Husain's goal, but I feel sad about all the suffering and killing that occurred.
One of the other reasons why I really like the story of "The Battle of Karbala" is because after all the suffering that happened against tyranny, the Benu Umayya clan didn't completely eliminate the good people. Al-Mukhtār Al-Thaqafī is the good person I was talking about. He was my hero who sought justice by avenging the killers of Imam Al-Husain. He was against the Umayyad Caliphs and also fought for peace. This made me truly believe that evil people can never escape the consequences of their actions.
All these warriors were killed because they refused to accept humiliation and injustice. What makes these three stories similar to me is that they all talk about famous and holy people. They have taught me to have patience for the sake of truth and to have faith in God.
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I personally respect every religion and love reading holy books. Holy books inspire many people and teach valuable morals and stories about our everyday lives. They have helped me learn the purpose of our existence in this world. I read the Quran every day as a part of my religious practice, but I also read other religious texts to gain knowledge.
The Quran contains many inspiring stories, but one that I adore is the story of Maryam, also known as Mary. Mary is mentioned in the Quran, Bible, and other holy books from different perspectives. What makes her story special to me is that she is the only woman mentioned by name in the Quran. It is also my favorite story because she serves as an inspiration for people of different religions and languages. She taught me the values of patience and unwavering faith in God.
I enjoy reading stories about miracles and strongly believe that they can happen. Witnessing a miracle is one of my heartfelt wishes, and my dad knows how much I love weird and true stories. So, when he went to Lebanon, he got me this Arabic book called "القصص الغريبة" (weird stories). This book turned out to be an amazing gift with hundreds of accounts of witnessed miracles. One specific story in the book was about a lady with cancer who prayed to Imam Al-Mahdi, Prophet Mohammad's grandson, for help. She miraculously met him in Mecca, and he advised her to drink Zamzam Water, resulting in her complete recovery. Stories like these reinforce my belief that Imam Al-Mahdi is present in this world and has the power to help and save people.
The struggle between good and evil is constant in every generation. One significant battle that took place on October 10, 680, not only fought for good, but also for peace, truth, and justice. "The Battle of Karbala" is a sad story that I read every year on the 10th of Muharram. It unfolded between the Benu Umayya clan and the Benu Hashem clan.
Yazid ibn Muāwiya ibn Abi Sufyan, from the Benu Umayya clan, was a dictator who ruled without fairness. Imam Al-Husain, from the Benu Hashem clan and Prophet Muhammad's grandson, fought against this evil. Imam Al-Husain refused to pledge allegiance to Yazid. During the battle, Imam Al-Husain's camp was surrounded by Yazid's soldiers, and their water supplies were cut off. What makes Imam Al-Husain my ultimate role model is that nothing deterred him from fighting against tyranny, even though he suffered greatly. In this battle, even Imam Al-Husain's infant was tragically shot by an arrow and killed. His execution was unimaginably brutal. Every time I read the words describing this event, my eyes well up. To this day, terrorists continue to commit acts of violence in Iraq because they revere Imam Al-Husain and annually visit his grave. He taught many Iraqis to fight for justice and never give up. Upon finishing the story, I experience a mix of happiness and sadness. I feel happiness because Imam Al-Husain's goal of exposing the falsehood of the Benu Umayya clan was realized, but I am also saddened by the immense suffering and loss of life that occurred.
One of the reasons I appreciate the story of "The Battle of Karbala" is that, despite the killings carried out by the Benu Umayya clan, they were unable to extinguish all the good in the world. Al-Mukhtār Al-Thaqafī is an example of the good that persisted. He was my hero; he avenged Imam Al-Husain's killers and fought for peace. This reinforces my belief that evildoers cannot escape the consequences of their actions.
All these warriors were killed because they refused to accept humiliation and injustice. What makes these three stories similar to me is that they all involve famous and holy individuals who taught me the importance of patience for the sake of truth and the need for unwavering faith in God.