revising danglers re write this sentence... By doing right all the time, your conscience will feel at ease.
Currently, it reads as if your conscience is doing right. Obviously, that's impossible.
How can you rephrase so that it makes sense? Give it a try and one of us here will give you feedback.
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Could it be...
Doing right all the time will ease your conscience?
That's perfect -- good job!
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To revise the sentence, we need to address the problem of a dangler, which occurs when the subject of the introductory phrase is not the same as the subject of the main clause. One way to rewrite the sentence without the dangler is:
"When you consistently do what is right, your conscience will feel at ease."
In this revised version, the introductory phrase "When you consistently do what is right" clearly connects with the main subject "you," ensuring that there is no dangler.