I left out these two sentences. Thank you
1) Nature is first described as a magic element and then suddenly is turned into a dangerous creature.
2) Nature is moved by a Mighty Spirit, whose presence is manifest in every stone and tree.
Both sentences are fine.
I thought you might be interested in an article about English grammar in the workplace:
http://online.wsj.com/article/SB10001424052702303410404577466662919275448.html
This passage explains and illustrates why you should ALWAYS include that serial comma before the conjunction:
Tom Kamenick battled fellow attorneys at a Milwaukee, Wis., public-interest law firm over use of "the Oxford comma" — an additional comma placed before the "and" or "or" in a series of nouns [or phrases]. Leaving it out can change the meaning of a sentence, Mr. Kamenick says: The sentence, "The greatest influences in my life are my sisters, Oprah Winfrey and Madonna," means something different from the sentence, "The greatest influences in my life are my sisters, Oprah Winfrey, and Madonna," he says. (The first sentence implies the writer has two celebrity sisters; the second says the sisters and the stars are different individuals.)
No problem! Here are the explanations for the missing sentences:
1) To understand how nature is first described as a magic element and then turns into a dangerous creature, you can analyze the context or text surrounding these sentences. Look for clues in the descriptions, symbols, or events that occur. Pay attention to any shifts in the tone or language used to describe nature. This can give you a deeper understanding of why the transition occurs and what it represents in the overall narrative or theme of the text.
2) To grasp the idea that nature is moved by a Mighty Spirit, and its presence is manifest in every stone and tree, you can look for hints or references in the surrounding text. Look for descriptions that suggest a spiritual or divine force behind nature's workings. Additionally, pay attention to any symbols or metaphors used to indicate the relationship between nature and the Mighty Spirit. Understanding the broader themes or philosophical views of the text might also provide insights into the role of spirituality in nature.