Can you please check if my rephrase is OK? I need to rephrase my previous post. I can't leave the sentences as they were. Thank you, Ms Sue.

How does George Orwell describe Winston Smith in the opening of Nineteen Eighty-Four? Make referece to the place where he lives, the instrument used by the party to monitor his life, and his job within the party.

OK -- but it should be "reference."