Thank you very much for helping me. Here are the very last sentences on the same theme. Thank you very much.
1) Over the years people have started watching ads more and more.
2) The way in which ads are made (?) has changed. The latest ads don’t just sell brands, they sell lifestyles.
3) Interactive advertising tries to create direct contact with its clients by producing a wide range of personalized products and services.
4) The use of children in ads can deprive them of their privacy. They are used only for stupid ads which can be dangerous both for them and the watchers.
5) The use of children in ads can transform the children watching them into victims.
6) People don’t switch channel to avoid ads but watch them.
7) The idea behind this magazine is to defend people against the might of the advertisers.The use of children is a way to attract audience as well as to sell a major number of products.
8) The biggest risk is that our children could grow up with a wrong idea of life.
1) Over the years, people have started watching ads more and more.
2) The way in which ads are made has changed. The latest ads don’t just sell brands; they sell lifestyles.
(Semicolon fixes the run-on.)
3) Interactive advertising tries to create direct contact with consumers by producing a wide range of personalized products and services.
4) The use of children in ads can deprive them of their privacy. They are used only for stupid ads which can be dangerous both for them and the watchers. These sentences are grammatically correct, but the ideas behind them are questionable. How can a child be deprived of his/her privacy when he/she and the parents have agreed to be in the ad in the first place? And if the "dangerous" aspects aren't explained, that's a really strange statement -- one not easily understood.
5) The use of children in ads can transform the children watching them into victims. victims of what?
6) People don’t switch channels to avoid ads, but they continue to watch them.
7) The idea behind this magazine is to defend people against the might of the advertisers. The use of children is a way to attract an audience, as well as to sell a major number of products.
8) The biggest risk is that our children could grow up with a wrong idea of life. <~~OK