I hope you can check these two long-winded sentences.Thank you
1) Pamela is writing to her family to tell her mum what happened to her, by accusing her master of hsi behaviour.
2) While they were in the summer house, Mr B kissed her but she had never talked about it to anybody.
3) Mr B discovers her while she is writing and he apologizes to her for what happened trying to find an excuse.
4) Once back home the words Gulliver uses to describe his feeings for his family are hate and disgust.
5) When his wife puts her arms aroung him and kisses him he faints.
He explaing this by saying that he has not been used to being touched by such a horrible animal.
6) He decides to pass (spend the rest of his life) in the stable among his beloved horses.
7) Pamela is also the first example of psychological novel in English literature since the heroine's personality is analyzed in depth.
1. ... his behaviour.
2. comma needed
3. two commas needed
4. comma needed
5. spelling (2 errors) and comma needed
6. Don't use "pass" in this context.
7. OK
1) The first sentence appears to have some errors. Here's a corrected version: "Pamela is writing to her family to inform her mom about an incident involving her master's behavior, as she accuses him."
To check this sentence, you can ensure that the subject (Pamela) and the verb (is writing) agree in tense and number. Then, you can verify that the rest of the sentence provides a clear and accurate explanation of what Pamela is doing (writing to her family) and what she is writing about (accusing her master).
2) The second sentence seems to have some minor word-choice issues. Here's a revised version: "While they were in the summer house, Mr. B kissed her, but she never mentioned it to anyone."
To verify this sentence, you can check if the subject (Mr. B) and the verb (kissed) agree in tense and number. Additionally, make sure the description of the timeline (while they were in the summer house) is clear and accurate. Finally, confirm that the reason for not mentioning the kiss (she never mentioned it to anyone) is properly conveyed.
3) The third sentence has a minor spelling mistake. Here's a corrected version: "Mr. B discovers her while she is writing, and he apologizes to her for what happened, attempting to find an excuse."
To check this sentence, ensure that the subject (Mr. B) and the verb (discovers, apologizes) agree in tense and number. Confirm that the action (apologizing to her) accurately reflects the situation described (Mr. B finding her while she is writing). Lastly, make sure the purpose of his apology (trying to find an excuse) is clearly stated.
4) The fourth sentence seems to have a word-choice issue. Here's a revised version: "Upon returning home, Gulliver expresses his feelings towards his family using words like hate and disgust."
To verify this sentence, check if the subject (Gulliver) and the verb (expresses) agree in tense and number. Confirm that the description of Gulliver's emotions (hate and disgust) is accurately conveyed. Finally, make sure the context of the sentence (Gulliver's return home) is properly presented.
5) The fifth sentence appears to have incomplete word usage. Here's an improved version: "When his wife puts her arms around him and kisses him, he faints."
To check this sentence, ensure that the subject (his wife) and the verb (puts, kisses) agree in tense and number. Confirm that the action (putting her arms around him and kissing him) accurately represents what happens. Finally, make sure the result of the action (he faints) is clearly stated.
6) The sixth sentence seems incomplete. Here's a revised version: "He decides to spend the rest of his life in the stable among his beloved horses."
To verify this sentence, check if the subject (He) and the verb (decides to spend) agree in tense and number. Confirm that the decision mentioned (to spend the rest of his life in the stable) accurately reflects the context. Ensure that the reason for that decision (his beloved horses) is properly conveyed.
7) The seventh sentence appears to contain a misspelling and a typographical error. Here's a corrected version: "Pamela is also the first example of a psychological novel in English literature, as the heroine's personality is analyzed in-depth."
To check this sentence, ensure that the subject (Pamela) and the verb (is) agree in tense and number. Confirm that the description of Pamela as an example of a psychological novel is accurately conveyed. Finally, make sure the reason for her significance (her personality being analyzed in-depth) is clearly stated.