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This summer I will be going to a theme park with my best friend. It will be fun because I like to go with friends. I've never been to this theme park before.

You try to correct the rest of this paragraph and post it here. I'll be glad to check it for you.

This summer my best friend and I will be going to a theme park. I always enjoy myself when I am with my friend so I am sure that the trip will be fun. I have yet to go to this theme park, and according to one of my classmates it holds the worlds highest coaster. I cant wait for our trip to the theme park!

Careful! There are errors in James' version.

Sure! Here's an improved version of your text with corrected sentence structure:

"This summer, my best friend and I are planning to go to a theme park together. I'm really looking forward to it because I love going to theme parks with friends. I've never been to this particular theme park before, but I've heard it's a lot of fun. Someone in my class told me that there's a rollercoaster there that is the tallest in the world. I can hardly wait to ride it! It's going to be an amazing experience."

In this revised version, I have separated the thoughts into complete sentences and fixed the sentence fragments.