Please help with my speech

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Academic Papers: How to Write a Good Speech
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But there is a great difference between orators and writers. Not every person who knows how to write a good speech knows how to use this ...

Writing a Successful Speech
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Writing a Successful Speech. By Gordon Turner. At some point in your career, you will find it necessary to do a speech or presentation. Sound scary? Something ...

How to Write a Good Speech | eHow.com
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Dec 17, 2011 – How to Write a Good Speech. Having a good speech is a lot like making a good cake. Having the right ingredients is the key to its success.

Be sure to develop your speech in the way the audience who you will be talking to will understand, and be sure to make a speech that will catch everyone's attention! Best of luck! :)

Like Kate said, make sure it fits your audience. If you're giving a speech to kindergartners, don't put high-school vocabulary in there. Writeacher has cited some very helpful resources that should aid you in your process. Above all, remember to beleive in your topic. If you don't fully back the subject you are speaking about, your purpose will fall flat and be ineffective.

Of course! I'd be happy to help you with your speech. Please provide me with the details of your speech topic or any specific areas you need assistance with.