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PROCEDURE: The patient was prepped and draped in the usual sterile fashion. Examination of the vocal chords in a sitting position revealed a poly-poid growth in front of the left false vocal cord with erythematous base and yellow colored tip. Vocal cord appeared normal with normal motion and without lesions.

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PROCEDURE: The patient was prepped and draped in the usual sterile fashion. Examination of the vocal chords in a sitting position, revealed a polypoid growth in front of the left false vocal cord, with erythematous base and yellow-colored tip. Vocal cord appeared normal, with normal motion, and without lesions.
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2 view x-rays taken here today of his right hand showed changes consistent with osteoarthritis. There was mild joint narrowing of the D.I.P. joints, incidentally, no comment was made about any erosions or changes in his MCP joints. Multiple imaging scans again have shown metastatic disease to the ribs, pelvis, and femoral, head, as well.

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Two view x-rays were taken today of his right hand; showed changes consistent with osteoarthritis. There was mild joint narrowing of the DIP joints, incidentally, no comment was made about any erosions or changes in his MCP joints. Multiple imaging scans again have shown metastatic disease to the ribs, pelvis, femoral, and head as well.

PROCEDURE: The patient was prepped and draped in the usual sterile fashion. Examination of the vocal chords in a sitting position<~~Were the vocal chords in a sitting position?, revealed a polypoid growth in front of the left false vocal cord, with erythematous base and yellow-colored tip. Vocal cord appeared normal, with normal motion, and without lesions.

Two-view x-rays were taken today of his right hand which showed changes consistent with osteoarthritis. There was mild joint narrowing of the DIP joints, incidentally,<~~run-on; unclear how "incidentally" fits in here no comment was made about any erosions or changes in his MCP joints. Multiple imaging scans again have shown metastatic disease to the ribs, pelvis, femoral, and head as well.

Procedure: The patient was prepped and draped in the usual sterile fashion. Examination of the vocal cords in a sitting position revealed a polypoid growth in front of the left false vocal cord with an erythematous base and yellow-colored tip. The vocal cord appeared normal with normal motion and without lesions.

Explanation: In the original sentence, there is a typographical error in "poly-poid," it should be "polypoid" to describe the growth accurately. Additionally, a comma is needed after "sitting position" to separate the different elements of the sentence. The phrase "with erythematous base and yellow-colored tip" should also be separated by commas to improve clarity. Lastly, the final phrase "without lesions" should be separated by a comma to complete the proper punctuation.

Answer: Two view x-rays were taken today of his right hand, which showed changes consistent with osteoarthritis. There was mild joint narrowing of the DIP joints. Incidentally, no comment was made about any erosions or changes in his MCP joints. Multiple imaging scans have once again shown metastatic disease to the ribs, pelvis, femoral, and head as well.

Explanation: The original sentence is missing some punctuation and has unclear wording. To improve clarity, a comma is needed after "right hand" to introduce additional information about the x-rays. The phrase "showed changes consistent with osteoarthritis" should be separated by a comma to improve readability. The initialism "D.I.P." should be written as "DIP" without periods. The sentence about the MCP joints is written awkwardly, so it is rephrased for better flow. Finally, the list of body parts affected by metastatic disease should be separated by commas to clearly indicate each location.