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Hey again, i've made the corrects you suggested...and i was hoping you could proof read just to make sure i did them correctly...Thankz

Noël
La saison de Noël est l'époque de l'année que je préfère. C’est une fête religieuse et il y a toujours beaucoup d’activités. Chaque année, je célèbre le Noël avec ma famille et ma famille étendue. L'année dernière à l'époque de Noël, ma famille and moi, nous avons décoré ensemble les arbres de Noël et nos maisons. Le soir du 24 décembre, après la messe de minuit, nous avons échangé un cadeau, un cadeau à chaque personne. Donc, les enfants se sont couchés parce qu’ils ont attendu le Père Noël. Le jour de Noël, chacun se sont réveillés parce qu’ils ont très excité. Il faisait très froid mais le ciel était bleu et le soleil brillait. Nous avons mangé notre petit-déjeuner. Donc, nous avons pris une marche durant le matin et plus tard nous nous sommes préparés pour la soirée ce soir. Nous avons préparé la nourriture pour un grand repas en commun. Plus tard, nos invitées sont arrivés et nous avons mangé le repas de Noël. Pour dîner, nous avons mangé du poulet, des tartes aux pommes, des pommes de terre sautées, des haricots verts et des asperges avec une sauce béarnaise. Après le dîner, nous avons échangé nos cadeaux et nous avons mangé nos desserts. Après le dessert, nous avons chanté des chants de Noël et nous avons dansé quand mon frère nous a joué la guitare. Plus tard, nous avons pris des bonbons et du vin chaud. C'était un Joyeux Noël.

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  1. read my correction, there are some mistakes again

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  2. Thank you for getting back to us. Although I don't yet see mk-tintin's corrections, this phrase "’ils ont attendu" might be l'imparfait instead of the passé composé if you wish to concentrate on "they were waiting for" rather than they "did wait for."

    Not "ils ont très excité" = "ils étaient (I like l'imparfait for "description" rather than "action." agités (better than excité which would be plural in any case).

    I wouldn't use "durant" but "pendant" or actually "le matin" is sufficient for "in the morning."

    "nos invitées" = only females? If males are also included "invités." Also I like "le" with "Pour le dîner."

    All in all, "good effort!"

    Mme

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