Can you have a look at these sentences, please?

1. I’m emailing you the list of students, who are looking forward to starting the email partnership. As you can see, there are 25 pupils, coming from different classes and age groups. Do you think you can find other 4 pupils from your school? If not, I will exclude four from the list.

Remove the comma after "students"

... Do you think you can find 4 more students ... ?

Of course! I'll be happy to look at these sentences for you.

1. "I’m emailing you the list of students, who are looking forward to starting the email partnership. As you can see, there are 25 pupils, coming from different classes and age groups. Do you think you can find other 4 pupils from your school? If not, I will exclude four from the list."

This sentence is well-constructed and clear. It conveys the message effectively. However, there is a small grammatical error in the phrase "other 4 pupils." Instead of saying "other," it should be "another." So the corrected sentence would be, "Do you think you can find another 4 pupils from your school?"

To get this correction, you need to pay attention to the use of "other" and "another." In this case, "another" is used because it refers to finding an additional four pupils. "Other" is used when referring to different or additional people or things in a general sense.

Overall, the sentence appears to be written well, but a minor correction is needed.