Which sentence is better?
Warren had a newspaper business and was one of the United States Senate.
Warren had a newspaper business and he was one of the United States Senate.
The first sentence is better. However, it would be even better if you wrote: Warren had a newspaper business and was a United States Senator.
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Both sentences have grammatical errors. Here's how to improve them:
1. Warren had a newspaper business and was one of the United States Senate.
Revised: Warren had a newspaper business and was a member of the United States Senate.
2. Warren had a newspaper business and he was one of the United States Senate.
Revised: Warren had a newspaper business, and he was a member of the United States Senate.
The improvements make the sentences clearer and more grammatically correct.