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I have recently found a number of business materials, including but not limited to information pertinent to our group project. On Saturday, I will attempt to scan, attach, and send via email some information that can help us gain a better understanding of a product life cycle.

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  1. I have recently found a number of business materials, including but not limited to<~~delete "but not limited to" -- it's stuffy. information pertinent to our group project. On Saturday, I will email you some information that can help us gain a better understanding of a product's life cycle.

    The changes I'm suggesting are to take out the stuffiness!

    =)

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