Can someone correct this for me?
I have recently found a number of business materials, including but not limited to information pertinent to our group project. On Saturday, I will attempt to scan, attach, and send via email some information that can help us gain a better understanding of a product life cycle.
I have recently found a number of business materials, including but not limited to<~~delete "but not limited to" -- it's stuffy. information pertinent to our group project. On Saturday, I will email you some information that can help us gain a better understanding of a product's life cycle.
The changes I'm suggesting are to take out the stuffiness!
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Thank you!
Of course, I can help you with that! However, since you didn't specify what exactly needs to be corrected, I will assume you want assistance with improving the grammar and clarity of the text. Here's a revised version of your message:
"Recently, I came across several business materials, which include relevant information for our group project. This Saturday, I plan to scan, attach, and send via email some information that will help us gain a better understanding of the product life cycle."
If there are specific parts you would like me to focus on or if you have any other instructions, please let me know!