For my slideshow I had wrote down - - Jake draws away from everyone. But corrected it to withdraw, so would that be like - -Jake withdraws away from everyone, or Jake withdraws from everyone?

I also wrote - - to act positive and move on, but she corrected me and said positively. So would that be - -to act positively and move on? Is there another way I could reword this because Animoto won't let me add more letters. I was thinking ... Be positive and move forward, not sure if that sounds good.

This is better: Jake withdraws from everyone.

This is very good: Be positive and move forward.

Thanks a lot Ms. Sue =)

Actually Act positively and move forward also fits, does it make sense?

Yes, your last statement is also good and makes sense.

You're welcome, Aaron.

To decide between "Jake withdraws away from everyone" and "Jake withdraws from everyone," you can follow these steps:

1. Determine the meaning you want to convey: Does Jake simply withdraw, or does he specifically withdraw away from everyone?
2. Consider whether adding the word "away" adds any additional emphasis or nuance to the sentence. If it does, then "Jake withdraws away from everyone" is the preferable option.
3. If you feel that "away" is unnecessary and "Jake withdraws from everyone" expresses your intended meaning clearly, then this is the better choice.

Regarding "to act positively and move on" or "to act positive and move on," you can follow these steps:

1. Analyze the verb phrase "to act."
2. Determine which adjective form fits better within the phrase. In this case, "positively" is the preferred adjective form to describe the action of "acting."
3. Therefore, "to act positively and move on" is the correct choice.

As for your suggestion of rewording the phrase, "Be positive and move forward," it is a valid alternative. It conveys a similar meaning but in a slightly different phrasing. Ultimately, whether it sounds good or not would depend on the overall context and tone of your slideshow.