I'm Writing a Discursive Essay on the topic "is it more difficult to be a young person today then it was 50years ago", I have these main points: "we have technology but its brought us media pressue" "Better education system but with more pressue to succed" "Medical Breakthrought but increased diseases" I agree that its harder being a young person today, so can you please help me put all these point into my intro and tell how to go about writing my essay thanx u: )
DON'T start any paper's first draft by writing the introduction! You can't effectively introduce a paper that you haven't written yet.
Follow the writing process, whether you're writing for science, history, English, or whatever:
Prewriting: Brainstorm, research, plan, outline, thesis statement
Writing: Write first draft by starting with section II of your outline; write the introduction after the body of the paper is written; write the conclusion last.
Polishing: Revise, concentrating first on the body of the paper, then the intro, then the concl (revision = making sure ideas are logical and sequential and support your thesis); proofread (spelling, grammar, usage, etc.)
Do you have a thesis yet? Have you done your brainstorming (and maybe research) yet? Have you written an outline?
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Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your paper. (If your statement is simply factual, then there's nothing to prove!)
http://blog.eduify.com/index.php/2009/06/21/5-tips-on-how-to-write-a-strong-thesis-statement/
Read carefully and follow ALL directions.
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into real thesis statements.
I'm Writing a Discursive Essay on the topic "is it more difficult to be a young person today then it was 50years ago", I have these main points: "we have technology but its brought us media pressue" "Better education system but with more pressue to succed" "Medical Breakthrought but increased diseases" I agree that its harder being a young person today. I've used this as my introduction "Being a young Person Today is easier in some sense and harder in some sense as we may have more freedom, resources,technology but all this has come with much more responsibilities that we have to deal with" can you improve it or help me put it in a better way using my main puts.
I don't want to see an introduction. What you need first is your thesis statement (one sentence) and your outline. Re-post when you have those figured out.
Certainly! Here's an example of how you can incorporate your main points into your essay introduction:
Introduction:
In today's rapidly evolving world, young people are encountering unique challenges and pressures that were virtually non-existent half a century ago. The advent of technology has undeniably made our lives more convenient but has also ushered in a wave of media pressure, impacting the well-being and self-esteem of youths. Furthermore, while the education system has seen significant improvements, the expectation to succeed has grown exponentially, burdening young individuals with overwhelming stress. Additionally, despite remarkable medical breakthroughs, the prevalence of diseases and health concerns among the youth has surprisingly increased. This essay aims to delve into these complex issues and explore the reasons why being a young person today has become significantly more difficult than it was fifty years ago.
To structure your essay effectively, consider following these steps:
1. Start with an engaging introduction that presents the main points and sets the tone for the essay. You've already drafted one in the provided example.
2. Begin each body paragraph with a clear topic sentence that relates to one of the main points you mentioned:
- Paragraph 1: Media Pressure
- Paragraph 2: Educational Pressures
- Paragraph 3: Health Concerns
3. Support each point with evidence, examples, or statistics. This will strengthen your argument and make your essay more persuasive. You may consider referencing studies on the impact of social media on self-esteem, discussing the rising competition in the education system, and exploring the escalating prevalence of mental health issues among the youth.
4. Present counterarguments and address them appropriately to showcase a balanced perspective. This could include acknowledging advancements in technology, the benefits of a more advanced education system, and the progress made in medical fields.
5. Conclude your essay by summarizing the main points and reinforcing your stance that it is indeed more challenging to be a young person today. Consider ending with a thought-provoking question or a call to action to encourage further reflection on the topic.
Remember to provide references for any sources you use and to proofread your essay before finalizing it. Good luck with your essay!