this be the last one
Judgement : Do you like it, and is it successful?
how well you think you have done with materials used?
is it original, innovative, and daring?
does the artwork make you think beyond the image?
is the artwork successful? how?
do you like artwork? why?
could it be improved?
Pencil was highlight of artwork, in which I be able to produce different shades to bring out and merge my picture. This artwork be innovative because it be something unlike anything ive created before. Artwork makes me think beyond the image because its a representation of life, about people getting dissolved within themselves that they not be able to bring their true self out. I believe this artwork be successful because it appears to be shattered which was main goal. Artwork appears lovely because it touch my soul, its something I thought of never creating, and im so proud of how it came out to be. Shading could be improved, will try to overdo some shading areas.
Pencil was the highlight of my artwork, in which I be able to produce different shades to bring out and merge my picture. This artwork is innovative because it is unlike anything I've created before. Artwork makes me think beyond the image because it's a representation of life, about people getting dissolved within themselves that they not be able to bring out their true selves. I believe this artwork is successful because it appears to be shattered which was my main goal. It appears lovely because it touches my soul. It's something I never thought of never. I'm so proud of how it came out. Shading could be improved, and I will try to redo some shading areas.
You seem to have wonderful insight into art! :-)
thank you very much ms. sue for helping :) yeah i love art very much i take it in grade 8,9 10, and 11 :D
:-)
You're very welcome, Mohammad.
ms. sue you be able to suggest title for artwork? i thought of shattered cat but that too plain. something that shows that people lose the real themselves.
Who Am I?
Dissolved Within Himself
I'm sure you can come up with a better title.
thanks very much ms. sue :)
You're very welcome, Mohammad.
*Pencil was the highlight of my artwork, in which I be able to produce different shades to bring out and merge my picture. This artwork is innovative because it is unlike anything I've created before. Artwork makes me think beyond the image because it's a representation of life, about people getting dissolved within themselves that they not be able to bring out their true selves. I believe this artwork is successful because it appears to be shattered which was my main goal. It appears lovely because it touches my soul. It's something I never thought of never. I'm so proud of how it came out. Shading could be improved, and I will try to redo some shading areas.*
To answer these questions, I will need to refer to the information you provided about the artwork. Let's break down each question and explain how to address it:
1. How well do you think you have done with the materials used?
To evaluate your performance with the materials, you can consider aspects such as the quality of the lines and shading achieved with the pencil. Look at the overall effect and compare it to your intended outcome.
2. Is the artwork original, innovative, and daring?
Consider whether your artwork showcases a unique style or perspective. Evaluate whether it brings forth a fresh and different approach compared to your previous works. Assess whether it takes artistic risks or pushes the boundaries of traditional artwork.
3. Does the artwork make you think beyond the image?
Think about whether your artwork elicits deeper thoughts or emotions. Consider if it encourages viewers to contemplate concepts beyond the visual representation. Reflect on the message or symbolism conveyed and its potential impact on the audience.
4. Is the artwork successful, and how?
To assess the success of your artwork, consider if it achieves the intended goals and objectives you set for it. Reflect on whether it effectively communicates the intended message or evokes the desired emotions. Additionally, evaluate how the artwork relates to your overall artistic vision or theme.
5. Do you like the artwork, and why?
Evaluate your personal response to the artwork and articulate what aspects you find appealing or compelling. Consider the emotions it evokes in you or the connection you feel to it. Determine whether it aligns with your own artistic preferences and values.
6. Could the artwork be improved?
Identify areas where you believe the artwork could be enhanced or refined. In this case, you mentioned that shading could be improved. Consider specific techniques or approaches you could apply to address these areas of improvement.
In summary, to answer these judgment-related questions about your artwork, you need to assess its quality, originality, and impact. Reflect on how well it meets your goals, elicits thoughts beyond the image, and resonates with you personally. Identify areas for improvement to further enhance the artwork.