teacher read story called The Secret Life of Walter Mitty and it be here
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i write my answers here and if you please help me edit correct them. i not sure if teacher say to start sentences or paragraphs out with title of story, author and genre. Teacher also say provide evidence that i try in my answers.
1. In story, "The Secret Life of Walter Mitty", by James Thurber, roles Walter Mitty play in his daydreams be a pilot during starting of story. "We can't make it, sir. It's spoiling for a hurricane, if you ask me." "I'm not asking you Lieutenant Berg," said the commander. Walter Mitty daydreams being Lieutenant Berg the pilot. Mitty daydreams of being doctor operating on man. He also daydreams being goon and captain of sergeant. And last he dreams being brave and bold man about to be shot by firing squad. Capabilites and personal qualities he demonstrate be confident and skilled. Impression he make on others be to use their imagination and make life fantasy like. The daydreams contrast with his daily life by in his imagination he be able to do a lot of things in his real life he be absent-minded, and forgetful.
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Your answer for question 1 is a good start, but you can make a few improvements. Here's the revised version:
"In the story 'The Secret Life of Walter Mitty' by James Thurber, Walter Mitty assumes various roles in his daydreams such as a pilot. For instance, he imagines himself as Lieutenant Berg, a pilot in a dangerous situation. This is evident when Mitty responds to a comment by saying, 'We can't make it, sir. It's spoiling for a hurricane, if you ask me' and the commander replies, 'I'm not asking you Lieutenant Berg.' Apart from being a pilot, Mitty also daydreams about being a doctor performing surgery, a goon, a captain of a sergeant, and a brave man awaiting a firing squad. Through these fantasies, Mitty demonstrates qualities of confidence and skill. His daydreams inspire others to use their imagination and think outside the box. These daydreams contrast with Mitty's daily life, where he tends to be absent-minded and forgetful.
In your answer, you have provided evidence from the story and mentioned the qualities and personal qualities demonstrated by Walter Mitty. Well done! Also, remember to always capitalize the first word of a sentence and use proper punctuation.