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Carina was inspected at that time, which appeared sharp with no mucosal lesions noted. A 2% lidocaine was instilled over the carina. Right main stem bronchus was inspected next. Opening to the right upper lobe was inspected, however 2 areas of abnormality were detected. All 3 anterior, posterior, and apical, segments were visualized without any obstruction noted.
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Run-on -- Opening to the right upper lobe was inspected, however 2 areas of abnormality were detected.
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Carina was inspected at that time, which appeared sharp with no mucosal lesions noted. A 2% Lidocaine was instilled over the carina. The right main stem bronchus was inspected next. The opening to the right upper lobe was inspected; however, two areas of abnormality were detected. All three anterior, posterior, and apical segments were visualized without any obstruction noted.
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