I left out two sentences. In my next post I will include some of the objectives I'm thinking of including in my project.
1) The woman is wearing a low-necked (two-tone) polka-dot dress, a large blue (sugar cane blue?) boater (straw hat) on her head and a pair of stilettos.
7) The man is wearing sun glasses on his head (???), a red half button-up shirt with a collar and elegant blue corduroy trousers
1. In my culture, straw hat is clearer than boater. From my knowledge, I don't believe that sugar cane is blue at all.
2. Where else does one wear sunglasses, other than on one's head? Phrase unnecessary.