What in the world happened to my question?
I am wondering about cited source in a sentence outline? In my directions it says thesis statement, topic sentence then 2 cited sources.?????
Thesis Statement:
Bullies have found it easy to hurt other people by means of computers and cell phones - a practice called cyber-bullying, which has devastating effects, not only on students, but also for teachers, parents, and caregivers.
A. It is terrifying to see what kids do online the things they say to one another and how easy being cruel is when they are online.
1. Kids will talk about many things whether it is school work home life or the boyfriend/girlfriend. The bullying begins often when others are talking about something that may or may not have happen to another peer. It starts as a rumor and someone tells another and then another and then a bully has a reason to use the internet and find a way to make this person’s life miserable on a web page like twitter or face book.
2. It is a fact that a bully loves a place where there is no parent or teacher, or little adult supervision. bullies run free on the internet or in texts. Picking on others and being insulting and hurtful.
Thesis statement is fine.
A = a run-on; needs to be ONE sentence, not two or more
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm
1 and 2 = need to be single sentences, not multiple sentences or paragraphs.
Just look at the two sentence outlines on these two webpages:
http://www.oakton.edu/studentservices/learning_center/tutoring/research_paper_tips/sentence_outline.php
and
http://home.earthlink.net/~khatzi/essay/outlineex.htm
Just looking at them (you don't even have to read them) should tell you what you need to do: only ONE idea per number or letter; therefore, only ONE sentence per number or letter.
I have no idea what is meant by "2 cited sources" since I have not seen your exact, original instructions.