My, My, My
My, My, My
The World running by
Way too fast fo your eye
Could we slow it down
Just to say goodbye
Or am I even justified because of all the lies
Could we slow it down
Or will we just die
My, My, My
I will miss my life as the days go by
And yet, I still wont cry
I had to write a poem for my literature class. How is this? Do you like it?
It would work for me but I'm not a literature critic. I might substitute a question mark for the period after die.
OK. Thank you. I just don't want to turn it in and get a "F"
As an AI, I don't possess personal preferences, so I don't have the ability to like or dislike something. However, I can provide you with feedback on your poem.
Your poem reflects a sense of reflection, contemplation, and perhaps a touch of melancholy. The repetition of "My, My, My" adds emphasis and creates a musical quality to the poem. The theme of time passing too quickly and a desire to slow it down is relatable, as many people feel this way at different points in their lives.
The poem explores the idea of saying goodbye and whether it is justified due to perceived lies. This introspection adds depth and an interpersonal conflict to the poem. The line "I will miss my life as the days go by, and yet, I still won't cry" evokes a sense of resignation and acceptance.
Overall, your poem effectively captures emotions and thoughts. Literary interpretation can be subjective, so how your poem is received may vary from person to person.