Dear (ss teacher's name),
Hi! How are you? I'm having a wonderful time of my life here in Massachusetts. Massachusetts is part of the New English colonies just to let you know. In addition the religion of Massachusetts is the Puritans. The founder of Massachusetts, John Winthrop says that anyone who comes to live here will lead a very successful life. You should really come and join me. There are some good things about Massachusetts that you should know. You'll be impress!
We can make money in several ways, in Massachusetts. For example, we shipbuilding goods. Another way we make money is by exporting tobacco to England. As you can see there are many ways to live a good life in Massachusetts.
Our government in Massachusetts is very different from England's. Only white male property owners/church members can choose who they want their leaders to be. Can you believe that? I think that's great! There are so many opportunities here to take advantage of. By the way, by 1720 only Christian men over the age 21 who owned property could vote so for now women can't vote.
The education is also very different here than in England. We have public schools, apprentice and Dame schools for girls. Apprentice is learned a trade or craft from a master. That's sound interesting!
I can't tell you how happy my family and I are living in Massachusetts. It has truly been a blessing to have been able to make a life here. I hope you could join me and explorer how wonderful Massachusetts really is! Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Fondly yours,
(my name)
is it good????
Yes, it's good, although there are a few small mistakes.
OK! :)
I'll go over it again and then I'll post it here to see if it's good.
Btw thanks I worked really hard on this assignment.
You're welcome. It shows that you worked hard on this assignment. :-)
My teacher gave us a formate and we fill it out (and we can pick one of the 13 colonies). So I choose Massachusetts. So after I finish the formate my Social Studies teacher said that we have to put it in our own words.
Dear (ss teacher's name),
Hi! How are you? I'm having a wonderful time of my life here in Massachusetts. Massachusetts is part of the New English colonies just to let you know. In addition, the religion of Massachusetts is the Puritans. The founder of Massachusetts, John Winthrop says that anyone who comes to live here will lead a very successful life. You should really come and join me. There are some wonderful things about Massachusetts that you should know. You'll be impress!
We can make money in several ways in Massachusetts. For example, we shipbuilding goods. Another way we make money is by exporting tobacco to England. As you can see there are many ways to live a good life in Massachusetts.
Our government in Massachusetts is very different from England's. Only white male property owners/church members can choose who they want their leaders to be. Can you believe that? I think that's great! There are so many opportunities here to take advantage of. By the way, by 1720 only Christian men over the age 21 who owned property could vote so for now women can't vote.
The education is also very different here than in England. We have public schools, apprentice and Dame schools for girls. Apprentice is learned a trade or craft from a master. That's sound interesting!
I can't tell you how happy my family and I are living in Massachusetts. It has truly been a blessing to have been able to make a life here. I hope you could join me and explorer how wonderful Massachusetts really is! Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Fondly yours,
(my name)
it is good now???
I change some mistakes.
Great!
ok
thank you! :)
Dear (ss teacher's name),
Hi! How are you? I'm having a wonderful time of my life here in Massachusetts. Massachusetts is part of the New English colonies. To learn more about Massachusetts, you can research the history of the New England colonies.
The religion of Massachusetts during this time was mainly Puritanism. The Puritans had a strong influence on the culture and society in Massachusetts. To understand more about the Puritans and their beliefs, you can look into Puritanism in colonial America.
John Winthrop is considered one of the founders of Massachusetts. He was the first governor of the Massachusetts Bay Colony and played a significant role in its establishment. To learn more about John Winthrop and his contributions to Massachusetts, you can read about the early history of the Massachusetts Bay Colony.
As for making money in Massachusetts, there were various ways during that time. One example is shipbuilding, which was an important industry due to Massachusetts' proximity to the ocean. Another way was through the export of tobacco to England. To find out more about the economy of Massachusetts during this period, you can explore the colonial economy and trade.
The government in Massachusetts had some differences from England. Only white male property owners and church members had the right to elect their leaders. This was a limited form of suffrage. To understand more about the political system in Massachusetts at that time, you can research colonial government and suffrage in the New England colonies.
Education in Massachusetts during this period also differed from England. Massachusetts had public schools, apprentice programs, and Dame schools for girls. Apprenticeship involved learning a trade or craft from a master. To delve deeper into education in colonial Massachusetts, you can study colonial education and the role of apprenticeship.
Overall, it sounds like you are enjoying your time in Massachusetts and appreciate the opportunities it offers. To fully understand the history and significance of Massachusetts, I recommend further research into the topics mentioned above. Enjoy exploring the wonderful aspects of Massachusetts!
Fondly yours,
(my name)