I am trying these on my own is this correct?

1.The service contract...on the whole...applied to upgrade. rewrite: Don't understand this sentence

2.All of our costs were within fair-guidelines. rewrite: All the cost were within the guidelines.

3.Al the lots we are selling offer a relatively easy access to the lake.Rewrite : All of the lots we are selling have easy access to the lake.

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  1. 1. It doesn't make sense to me either. Please ask your instructor for clarification.

    2. OK.

    3. OK. But "easy access" should be clarified. Are the lots all within one block -- or a half mile -- from the lake?

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