i have to take out embellishments, misquotations,false benefits and unethical tactics out of these sentence can some one help me

1.The service contract...on the whole...applied to upgrade.

2.All of our costs were within fair-guidelines.

3.Al the lots we are selling offer a relatively easy access to the lake.

Morgan/Sharon -- I did two sentences for you earlier today. Now it's your turn.

http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1326475215

I'll be glad to check YOUR revisions of these sentences.

Sure! I'd be happy to help you remove embellishments, misquotations, false benefits, and unethical tactics from these sentences. Here's how you can do it:

1. The original sentence: "The service contract... on the whole... applied to upgrade."
Explanation: In this sentence, you can remove the phrase "on the whole" as it doesn't add any meaningful information.

Revised sentence: "The service contract applied to upgrade."

2. The original sentence: "All of our costs were within fair-guidelines."
Explanation: This sentence seems to imply a sense of fairness without providing specific information. To make it more accurate, you can remove the term "fair-guidelines" and provide concrete details.

Revised sentence: "All of our costs were reasonable and adhered to industry standards."

3. The original sentence: "All the lots we are selling offer a relatively easy access to the lake."
Explanation: This sentence doesn't contain any significant embellishments, misquotations, false benefits, or unethical tactics.

Revised sentence: "The lots we are selling provide convenient access to the lake."

By following these guidelines, you can remove any unnecessary or misleading elements from the original sentences and present clearer, more truthful information.