Writing sentences and paragraphs. Is this correct?
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Dear Elizabeth,
I am anxious when I found out that you move back to town, and looking for job. My SBU manager, is currently hiring for a production manager. She is SBU manager for ACS. I think you should apply for the job. The requirements for the position are, working with offshore, meeting turnaround expectation, meeting quality expectation, answering phone calls, working one on one with the customer, working one on one with operators, setting up web meeting, testing new programs, ordering supplies, making decisions on hours that are needed work daily, and approving time scheduling off with the co-workers. You are always willing to learn any new opportunities that are offer up, compassionate about other feeling, and extremely good at multi-tasking. It would be a good access to have you join our team.
All my best,
The paragraph you provided has a few grammatical errors and could be improved for clarity. Here is a revised version:
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Dear Elizabeth,
I was thrilled to learn that you have moved back to town and are currently looking for a job. I want to let you know that my SBU manager, who is the SBU manager for ACS, is currently hiring for a production manager position. I believe this job would be a great fit for you.
The requirements for the position include working with offshore teams, meeting turnaround and quality expectations, answering phone calls, providing one-on-one support to customers and operators, setting up web meetings, testing new programs, ordering supplies, making daily work hour decisions, and approving time off schedules with co-workers.
I know you are always eager to learn new opportunities, and you possess great compassion for others while being excellent at multitasking. Having you join our team would be a valuable addition.
Wishing you all the best,
[Your Name]