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At DMD Medical Supplies, the employees have not been working together as a team. I feel this is the issue concerning the company to pay an extra $200.00 in overtime. The two employers I manage are Jack and Ruth. If Jack would take over some of Ruth’s assignments it would cut back on her hours. This would fix the company paying an extra $200.00 in overtime. Ruth then would not be so tired and her work would be more efficiently. Also by doing this Jack would have more assignments to do. This would make him a more efficient team member by taking less breaks and not being late. This will make the team at DMD Medical Services run more efficiently.

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