Hi,

Writeacher this is my reposting from the Jack and the Beanstalk story.

#1-

Well in the beginning of the of the story he was a caring good boy. So, he was a good character. The only bad thing he did was stealing from the ogre.

#2-
In the beginning of the story Jack had a job of selling the milk(that their cow gave) with his mother. But the cow stopped giving milk so he had no job.

#6-

The first conflict was between Jack Jack's mother vs their cow that stopped giving milk.

second conflict was between Jack and his mother because Jack sold the cow for beans, and his mother was disappointed.

Jack proved to his mother that the beans were magical. The main conflict now is Jack is poor, and needed money.

#7- The climax of the story is Jack steals the money from the huge ogre.

#8- The resolution of the story is Jack becomes really rich after stealing the money from the ogre. Jack marries a princess and him, his mother, and his wife lived happily ever after.

#10-

I categorized this story as a fairytale.

Be sure to check carefully for ALL the corrections I've made; not all are in bold.

#1- Well in the beginning of the of the story he was a caring good boy. So, he was a good character. The only bad thing he did was stealing from the ogre.
Get rid of "Well"
Put his name in there in place of the first "he"
Get rid of the comma after "So"
If you want your teacher to believe you, then you need to tell why you think he was "good" and how that outweighs the stealing, which is pretty bad!


#2- In the beginning of the story, Jack had the job of selling the cow's milk with his mother. Then the cow stopped giving milk, so he had no job.

#6- The first conflict was between Jack's mother and their cow that stopped giving milk. How is this a conflict? Did the cow argue with the mom and therefore stop giving milk?

The second conflict was between Jack and his mother because Jack sold the cow for beans, and his mother was disappointed.

Jack proved to his mother that the beans were magical. The main conflict now is Jack and his mother are poor and need money.

#7- The climax of the story happens when Jack steals the money from the huge ogre.

#8- The resolution of the story is that Jack becomes really rich after stealing the money from the ogre. Jack marries a princess, and then he, his mother, and his wife live happily ever after.

#10- I categorize this story as a fairytale.

Hello! It seems like you have shared some information about the story of "Jack and the Beanstalk." It's always interesting to analyze stories and identify different elements within them. Let's go through your points and discuss how you arrived at your conclusions.

#1 - You have indicated that Jack is a good character because he is caring. This assessment is based on your understanding and interpretation of the story. To determine if a character is good or bad, it's important to analyze their actions, motivations, and their overall impact on the story.

#2 - You described how Jack's job of selling milk with his mother is affected when the cow stops giving milk. You've accurately highlighted a key event in the story that leads to Jack's situation changing. This event contributes to the conflict and further development of the plot.

#6 - You discussed two conflicts in the story. The first conflict is between Jack, his mother, and their cow. The cow stopping to give milk becomes a problem for them. The second conflict is between Jack and his mother when he sells the cow for beans. You also mentioned that Jack proves the beans' magical nature to his mother. Then, the main conflict shifts to Jack being poor and needing money. These conflicts propel the narrative forward.

#7 - You identified the climax of the story as when Jack steals money from the huge ogre. The climax usually represents the highest point of tension or the turning point in the story. Stealing from the ogre is a significant action that impacts the plot and drives the resolution.

#8 - According to your analysis, the resolution of the story is when Jack becomes rich after stealing from the ogre. He marries a princess, and they all live happily ever after. The resolution is the part of the story where the conflicts are resolved, and loose ends are tied up. It provides closure to the narrative.

#10 - Lastly, you categorized the story of "Jack and the Beanstalk" as a fairytale. This genre classification aligns with the magical elements, mythical creatures, and a happy ending that are commonly found in fairytales.

Overall, your analysis demonstrates a good understanding of the story's key elements, conflicts, and resolution. Remember, analyzing a story involves interpreting events and characters based on the information provided. Keep up the good work!