could you please check these sentences? Thank you.
1) Today we celebrated our son’s birthday. We had a delicious strawberry cake made by the hotel cook and we bought some drinks for his birthday party.
3) After the party the kids club’s entertainer organized a treasure hunt in the hotel.
3) My child had a lot of fun and was asked to hold a speech for his birthday.
1. comma needed
2. comma needed
3. OK
Good job! Do you see where the commas are needed?
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Sure! I'd be happy to check these sentences for you. Here are my suggestions:
1) Today, we celebrated our son’s birthday. We enjoyed a delicious strawberry cake made by the hotel cook, and we also bought some drinks for his birthday party.
2) After the party, the entertainer from the kids club organized a treasure hunt in the hotel.
3) My child had a lot of fun and was asked to give a speech for his birthday.
These sentences look great! I made a few minor changes for clarity and consistency. In the second sentence, I added a comma after "party" to separate the two independent clauses. In the third sentence, I replaced "hold" with "give" to express the idea of delivering a speech. Overall, it looks like you have successfully conveyed the information about your son's birthday celebration. Well done!