Does number one look good so far?
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The story of "The Turtle and the Rabbit Run a Race" teaches a few lessons. What lesson does it teach about cheating?
1- The story of The Turtle and the Rabbit Run a Race teaches that even if you get what you want, and win you will always get what you deserve.
The turtle won the race without working hard. If a person doesn’t work hard he/she will definitely get what they deserve. It is like seeing the results of building a house without working hard on it, and building it right.
Let's take these sentences apart:
The story of The Turtle and the Rabbit Run a Race <~~Put the title in quotation marks and delete the words The story of
teaches that even if you get what you want, and win you will always get what you deserve. <~~convoluted and misplaced comma; how can you say this more simply -- AND put the comma(s) in the right places?
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm
The turtle won the race without working hard. <~~OK
If a person doesn’t work hard he/she will definitely get what they deserve. <~~pronoun/antecedent error; unclear response: does "work hard" equate good results? or bad results? or what?
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It is like seeing the results of building a house without working hard on it, and building it right. <~~Misplaced comma -- and unclear -- do you mean that the house will be well built? or badly built? or unfinished? or what? Don't leave things like this to your readers to conclude. They are not mindreaders.
To analyze if number one looks good so far, we can examine the statement made about the lesson taught in "The Turtle and the Rabbit Run a Race." The statement suggests that the story teaches that even if someone cheats and wins, they will eventually get what they deserve. This can be seen as a moral lesson about the consequences of cheating.
To determine if this interpretation is accurate, you can refer to the original text of "The Turtle and the Rabbit Run a Race." Read the story carefully, paying close attention to any references or elements related to cheating. Analyze the actions and outcomes of the characters within the story, specifically focusing on how cheating is portrayed.
Additionally, you can consult different interpretations or analyses of the story by scholars, critics, or educators. This can provide a broader perspective and help you form a well-rounded opinion about the lesson taught in the story.
Remember that analyzing literature involves close reading, critical thinking, and considering different viewpoints. This process will help you determine if number one accurately represents the lesson taught in "The Turtle and the Rabbit Run a Race."